Monday, March 18, 2013

Dusty Neibauer's Golden Circle

My golden circle:

What can I learn from the world from literature / writing?
How can I prove what I think I know is in the literature / topic at hand?
Why does it matter (how does it affect the literature? my own views? effectiveness?)?

I try to teach from the inside out because students need to know what it is they’re trying to accomplish or do with their coursework. So in essence, I’ve realized that I’ve sort of inverted the circle into a target, with the middle being the end result or goal that I want them to be able to “hit.”This is with regard to literature analysis, but can be applied to writing, analytical thinking, thesis statements, etc. While this is sort of going against the speaker’s model, I like this better, as the outside of my target contains the widest margin to hit - the broad concepts of “what are we doing in the class.”
Then, a tougher ring to hit, the “How can I prove what I see / how I interpret the literature” ring, students are now applying skills to the task, and trying to work with the literature using evidence - that’s a tougher skill to hit, so the scope is narrowed.
Lastly comes the middle of the target, the “bullseye” of what I want them to be able to do. A bullseye is tough to achieve, and takes skill, and is not something that many are capable of without practice, and I find that to be true with regard to literature analysis as well. My “Why,” then, is “Why does it matter?” This is the key to a thesis statement, and a key to understanding literature as well, and if students are able to answer that question ( not only the classic “Reader Response Critical Literary Theory” method of asking why something can be related to one’s own experiences, but also, and in my opinion more importantly,  to larger society, or literature, or cross-cultural understanding)  it seems as if they’re now capable of more high-level thinking. And, as a bonus, I can stop writing “Why does this matter” or “Why should I care” or “be more specific!” on their thesis statements!
The final part, the “why does it matter?” part, is also what I believe, and that informs my teaching significantly. I try and communicate this to students through a couple of different ways, but the most significant is through literature analysis. We have discussions about what the author is trying to show us or reveal to us through the literature, and that lends itself to discussions about whether they think that is relevant to themselves, or of equal importance, to contemporary society. Shifting the scope of students’ views of the world from squarely on themselves (which is enhanced by the messages received through modern social media, as well as the popular art / media they generally consume) outward to the world and others’ experiences is an important step to make in creating the future’s citizens and thinkers, and that is something that I’m always trying to do. It’s also useful when talking about thesis statements in writing, because the “why does this matter” portion of a thesis is sometimes the hardest portion for them to write, and that can be reflected in those kinds of outward-gazing conversations.
As far as conveying such views to my colleagues, I’d say that I generally do so through conversation. For the parents, though, I’m not really sure if any parent has asked me my philosophy through conversation, conferences, or otherwise, which I haven’t really considered until now. It’s kind of concerning, to be honest, that the level of discourse regarding their child’s education is relegated to the standard “What’s his/her grade and are they respectful in class?” formula in our district. I can do more to convey it through initiating said conversation in the appropriate forums, through syllabi posted to my personal webpage / schoology page, and other such things, but it still feels more passive than it deserves to be.

Saturday, March 16, 2013

Norms Process -- Notes - TED talk by Brene Brown

Courage, Shame, Vulnerability, Empathy, Forgiveness

"Vulnerability is not weakness; that thought is profoundly dangerous."
-- pure courage - emotional risk, purity, earnestness; the most accurate measure of courage.

"Vulnerability is the birthplace of innovation, creativity, and change."
The most important opportunity, function, and role of a critic is to defend / be in the defense of the new. An informed audience with knowledge of what's come before has an opportunity to help refine and promote those chances and risks that innovators need to take to move their areas of life, art, etc. forward.

Lock and load - a good motto for a researcher?

Shame researcher that had the breakdown - I think we need to really see the TED talk in which it happened.
Talking of shame - All-importance is necessary in some roles and jobs -

TED is a failure conference - few are there that haven't failed time and again - important for students to know, since they watch so many of them now.

Shame is the force that works against accomplishment - since our personalities and identities are tied to the fear of it, it's probably one of the bigger hurdles of modern students -

Shame for women is brought about by conflicting expectations of what they're supposed to be - supposed to never let anyone "see you sweat" or know your struggles.

Men are more accomplishment-oriented - our first response is to take action, or reference what we've already done. It's a sort of defense mechanism against feeling personal shame.

18-word statement, sentence, rule for our community of learners

Vulnerability is having the courage to take a risk, and is the "birthplace of innovation, creativity, and change." Cara, Keisha, Kathy, Nichole, Kalin, Melinda, and Dusty

Empathy is the end-all to shame.

Forginess is learned through shame.

Acceptance - that you have faced shame.




While I'm working on assignments, I'm finding that I can get work done fairly quickly, as I have had limited time to work on them, since naptime has been shortening for my daughter Elise. So, it's satisfying to be able to check off assignments when they're done.

I've been reaffirming to myself that I am, however, not a great multitasker, which I guess I already knew. I need to devote myself completely to the task at hand; otherwise, I find that I've got 7-8 different programs running, burning a cd, clicking on this and that with wondrous abandon.

As far as questions go, I'm wondering what I should do for my CIQ Matrixes for the next 6 weeks, as I'm taking paternity leave. Also, I'm not sure if the assignments tab is working for me yet, as the papers going through the St. Mary's offices are moving at a beurocratic pace.

I'm wondering whether my research question is what I want to pursue. I know I'm interested in the outcomes, but I'd also like to do some literature-based analysis; I sometimes wonder if I could somehow work two research questions in there (though I know that's not a feasible option).


Regarding the TED talk by Brown -

I think that encouraging students to take risks is a huge component to modern education. One of my esteemed colleagues mentioned that this generation, or an upcoming one, will have their whole lives potentially documented digitally. That sort of leads to a homogenezation of self - people are conforming more to what they could see of themselves online according to someone else's vision of self. So, to get students to take those risks in stepping outside of the norms of academia, especially with regard to things they're not well-versed in, one must encourage them to be vulnerable, take chances, and innovate through taking chances.  Without being personally vulnerable, individuals won't create new things, and won't drive their areas forward.


Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Action Research Question

In what ways can both peer editing and feedback regarding students' writing benefit students' critical reading and writing skills, as well as foster a supportive learning community,  in the secondary English classroom?